Submission Beginnings??  

sportsfan362437 50F  
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11/16/2019 9:08 pm

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Submission Beginnings??

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sportsfans63 56M
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11/16/2019 9:53 pm

Love your blog, keep writing, I’m looking for more from you

sportsfan362437 replies on 11/16/2019 10:05 pm:
Thank you.

h4rry66 53M
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11/16/2019 10:51 pm

Nice writing and profile pic x

sportsfan362437 replies on 11/17/2019 6:58 am:
Thank you for the kind words.

pytimesx 59M
827 posts
11/17/2019 12:43 am

In part but not quite. I prefer starting at the center of her pleasures in effort to induce her to engage in complimentary stimuli before taking control of those areas.

sportsfan362437 replies on 11/17/2019 6:58 am:
Oh really? Please do feel free to share more, and thank you.

sphxdiver 69M  
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11/17/2019 10:16 am

Love the way you said that !!

pytimesx 59M
827 posts
11/19/2019 2:04 pm

sharing just a bit as even trade secrets and copyrights have no protections on sites like this.

It comes with the understanding that sex is all about the woman ( most of the time ). If he's not facilitating 20 to 1 orgasms, he clearly doesn't understand that simple maxim. anyway...

It starts with a simple objective "make her panties wet"

And this means without pushing her panties through the vulva or worst, pass the labia and into her pussy. With the proper patience her panties should be wet before he ever reaches the wet zone.

Getting there is not isolated to the physical

sportsfan362437 replies on 11/19/2019 2:59 pm:
In my opinion, by the time it has reached something physical, the mind is already captive.
As I have written many times, stimulate my mind, my body follows as though it has no choice.

So, in my mind, when I wrote this, my mind already belonged to Him.... this was just nature taking it's course.

Thank you for the perspective... much appreciated.

pytimesx 59M
827 posts
11/21/2019 2:48 am

I can appreciate "stimulate my mind, my body follows" but it's an overused, widely misunderstood and unattainable cliche'. I know women throw it around like unconditional love but in all actuality, that too is an obtuse adage. Neither provide any insight as to what the woman really means at the moment she says it and they're both moving targets. If you fancy yourself a gifted orator, articulation is the key to intellectual stimuli as much as what's in the detail of spoken words - unspoken doesn't really work and that appears to be a significant challenge for many.

It's unfortunate, as you say, "surrendered your mind" when surrendering your body should have been the objective. There's a difference

sportsfan362437 replies on 11/21/2019 10:49 am:
Well, when I first joined this site, it was NOT overused, and made sense to me. It still does, and I think my profile states it pretty clearly. If you think and can write creatively, and in detail, that'll do it.
If someone isn't up for a challenge, when the reward may be beyond their wildest dreams, then they have the option of moving along.
Surrendering my body is never the objective, and mindless idiot can do that. And yes THAT is the difference.

pytimesx 59M
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11/23/2019 1:20 am

In the context of its use, there's a huge difference between 'surrender' and 'giving-it-up/away'. Few teenagers ever understand this and surprisingly a comparable number of mature adults. But if you're writing poetry, as in how the content is laid out, you'd have a few thesauruses and other helper books near-by having used those to fully embrace that difference. But don't get your panties in a twist, I'm only an analyst making an observation in an effort to get you in the right direction. Those who want real criticism and critique go to my brother the professor who sends young writers running out of the room in tears.

sportsfan362437 replies on 11/23/2019 6:57 am:
This layout does not always suggest poetry. It also suggests complete separate posts.
Good thing I'm not writing a college paper, isn't it?!

pytimesx 59M
827 posts
12/4/2019 4:28 pm

Yeah, he's an idiot

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